Comments on: Work in Progress http://hawkeyegirl.com/index.php/2007/06/05/work-in-progress/ Sun, 2 Mar 2008 08:05:04 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: hawkeyegirl http://hawkeyegirl.com/index.php/2007/06/05/work-in-progress/comment-page-1/#comment-666 hawkeyegirl Tue, 05 Feb 2008 22:11:49 +0000 http://hawkeyegirl.com/index.php/2007/06/05/work-in-progress/#comment-666 Thanks and yeah, I expect better of me too, but I'm usually disappointed. Thanks and yeah, I expect better of me too, but I’m usually disappointed.

]]> By: Corey http://hawkeyegirl.com/index.php/2007/06/05/work-in-progress/comment-page-1/#comment-125 Corey Sat, 25 Aug 2007 18:57:06 +0000 http://hawkeyegirl.com/index.php/2007/06/05/work-in-progress/#comment-125 I like it, excpet for this one sentence: Woman began dying in childbirth much more often then before, and alwys when birthing girl children. Using 'then' instead of 'than', c'mon now, I expect better of you. Also you missed a letter in 'always.' I like it, excpet for this one sentence:

Woman began dying in childbirth much more often then before, and alwys when birthing girl children.

Using ‘then’ instead of ‘than’, c’mon now, I expect better of you. Also you missed a letter in ‘always.’

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